Rough Cut Feedback Analysis

After receiving feedback from our class we are are going to make sure that we edit our trailer using the improvements that were listed. We won the majority vote of who has the 'best' trailer, this allowed us to notice that we were highly capable of making it even better with just a few minor improvements. We sat down and talked about things that we were going to add into our trailer to make it more successful. As a group we have decided to do some more shooting, simply because when researching into other horror trailers we noticed that the close ups of the psychopaths face worked really well to build tension and make the trailer look more appealing. We are now having to plan some more shooting time so that we can arrange to do more close ups of our characters face, and especially her eyes. Using the makeup we are going to make her face look pale white, with splatters of blood to connote danger and death. I believe that adding in these small aspects will help to create a unique look to our trailer, with a keen interest on attention to detail. From self evaluation we noticed that if our trailer had a change in pace and make some particular parts go very faster could really help to suspension to form. The writing was a try successful part of our trailer and everyone liked the way it cracked over the screen, they did suggest that we added more, however we tried this and it seemed to slow the pace that we so desperately are trying to keep, and therefor we decided that it looked better without.