Feedback On Rough Cut- improvements

 What did you think could be improved in the trailer?

•The jump scare

•Music needs to be improved throughout the second half No use of real reactions

•More shots of the psychopath

•The narrative was slightly confusing

•Random close ups

•Music seemed to be quite slow

•The scene were Frankie was dragged through the hallway needs to be faster

• The jump scare needs to be shortened

•Needed some more effects

 •Shots need to be quicker in the middle of the trailer

•More music throughout the second half

•Herat beat needs to be louder

•The location

 •The continuity of the swing

•The jump scare needs to be louder